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Its always nice to see some fresh content in terms of new things on the old NG... you can only watch stick figures fighting for so long...
good job man, it was nice.
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The flash itself wasnt that great, however next time when you make buttons, define a rectangular (or solid) area for your hit state.... having to click exactly on the text is annoying.
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I really like how this is progressing. The artwork is superb! If there is anything that I could think to improve, I'd have to say that the animation itself could be touched up here and there, make it a little smoother... a little more flowing. Perhaps work a little more emotion into the voice acting.
Dont get me wrong, i'm not bashing any of this. It's becoming one of the best series on NG, and I'm just offering some constructive criticism to perhaps make the series even better.
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I think you're onto somthing good... how bout a longer toon?
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Seen nearly all this crap before on engrish.com
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If you are going to 'break everything up' into episodes, perhaps each episode should have a little more finality to it... nothing wrong with suspense, But the movie is so short that it feels as if it didnt get anywhere.
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The size is big enough to justify the use of a pre-loader.
They're extremely simple to code (about 3 lines of code) especially with the built in functions getBytesTotal(); and getBytesLoaded(); that are included in flash 5 and higher.
There are a bunch of tutorials online if you dont have the actionscript background to figgure it out from scratch.
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Its soo nice to see something different for once. And the music fit perfectly ( I knew i recognized that from somewhere). Great Job!
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What can i say? I loved madness combat, and i loved this too...
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.... but it do better as far as sound goes. Overall, the sounds(namely background) seemed to cut in and out at seemingly random points. Silence can be powerful, but when it is stuck in between background music that is sometimes there and sometimes isnt, it's kinda distracting. Perhaps a more solid background track or at least some ambient bg noise would help.
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