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Flash Reviews: 77
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It's about time we start seeing something of yours that isnt stupid animals or whatever you call it. Good work, You should create more along this line.. well done.
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I noticed that it doesnt start running slow if you dont shoot... This likely means that you're not "killing off" your instances such as bullets and enemies after they have left the screen.
Im sure you could vastly improve the gameplay by modifying your code to clean up all of the unseen objects after they've gone off the stage.
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Even if you were to ignore the smooth and fluid animation, the sound design here almost could stand on it's own. I think a lot of authors could learn a lot from your use of sound in this one. The effects were very original and descriptive... Some people have no idea how much crappy "default" sfx can bring down the quality of a movie... you're obviously not one of them.
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Great to see this piece of work.... Tons of detail and very accurate to the history behind it.
A powerful way to tell the story. Thanks.
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... I think you can look forward to seeing a nice check in the mail come time for the June NG vote.
Good work.
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Would have been better if you could clearly incorporate your meaning into the animation a little better. Someone should be able to "get it" without reading the comments. I think you could have done better in this area.
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Here's a tip.. dont record sounds from your TV and then use them to make your animations.... they are all blown out and distorted to hell. Other than that, I didnt find the whole thing to be very funny. May want to spend some time increasing your animation skills before submitting more.
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I think everyone around here knows what a gund and a sword looks like, as well as what they are used for... who cares?
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.. but I felt the way you ended it was a pretty poor way to resolve the movie... This sort of ending might work in a sci-fi genre or even as a small part of a larger movie, but I wish the conflict would have been resolved in a different way, as right now it kinda takes away all of the meaning behind the whole story. Anyway, I like your style, good luck with the film festival.
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Liked the animation and the style of your characters, but the comp generated voice totally killed any potential this thing had... In the future either avoid the comp voice and track down some voice actors or put more of your own voice acting in.
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